Story Board

 I created a storyboard to really get the idea of what I want to film and how I am going to film it. The storyboard gave me a chance to change a few things and get new ideas. 

        I had trouble lengthening the film without making the added scene look forced. I realized creating this I had difficulty, introducing the world and letting the viewer know it is too perfect. So, I created a character she is the opposite of Eden, her name is Mary. She was named Mary due to her having a biblical reference just like Eden. I also wanted Mary to have a name that was very generic and basic, something that does not stick out, which shows that she fits in perfectly. I will introduce this by. Mary driving the car and her having a conversation my hope is to show the the town is crazily perfect in this conversation and Eden is against it.