Creating the script

 I started creating my script for the 40 second conversation and I think its good. Next class, I am going to show my friend what I have done and what they think. This is the biggest section of the film so I went it to be really well done and hearing what my peers think about the script. will help me make changes. I am sure that I will change the script at least a little, it is my draft after all. 

      I wanted to make sure that it shows that Mary is very uptight and perfect in the script. I also wanted her to show that she looks down on Eden, she is better than her. Eden on the other hand shows that she doesn't like 'infernal' and she's rebellious.